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She tries to scream but her voice stops at her throat
She wants free of this man in his dark leather coat
She begins to cry but he doesn't care
She tries to break free so he pulls her hair
Now she's lying in bed, afraid to close her eyes
She's in so much pain so in darkness she cries
She tries to go on as she did before
But everyone knows so they call her a *****
The pain is killing her. It's way too strong
She's exhausted from hiding. She cannot go on
She rushes home and she slams her door shut
She screams to herself, "Why do they call me a ****?
They don't know the story! They weren't even there!
Besides it's my life why do they care?"
She runs to the bathroom and looks in the mirror
Her reflection holds the memory so she cries in fear
She opens the cabinet and grabs some pills
She goes to the kitchen gets vodka for thrills
She drinks and she swallows till there's no pain inside
And that's how this girl commited suicide
But she wasn't the only one who died from it
Cause unbeknownst to her she was expecting a kid

Choices:
Wow intense...why isn't it published yet??
Really good...for a beginner.
Eh...no comment.
Too much like Traped in the Closet by R.Kelly.
YOU CALL THIS POETRY?? I CALL THIS SHIT!!!!

 


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